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And then there was one .. by ~kamijisatsu:iconkamijisatsu:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Open


i wish i could say i was different;
that your inspiration is gone

but it's not

the way things feel is still the same

floating memories in the wind
on a carousel of severed memories
(wasn't that a load of shit?)

even complex metaphors don't change things

i find the simple things hurt more;
everything hurts more

care for a rhyme?

well, you're gone

nothing can change that

i can rhyme for you
sing for you
cry for you

it's all the same song

empty tears
broken heart

i'm confused at all this mess

i laugh and it doesn't sound the same





running out of inspiration here ..





i'm looking at the clock now

tick--tock--


let's close our eyes
come back to earth



and this poem can be nothing but a dream
©2006-2009 ~kamijisatsu
:iconkamijisatsu:

Author's Comments

It's shit. It's meant to be shit. It was a shitty reason for inspiration ..

I miss you. Just know that.

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=Ameas-Qua Sep 21, 2006, 2:00:32 PM
oh honey.

*hug*

--
Ameas Qua.
:iconkamijisatsu:
~kamijisatsu Sep 21, 2006, 2:25:31 PM
-Hugs.

Thank you, darling.
:iconsweet-ophelia:
~sweet-ophelia Sep 21, 2006, 7:21:22 PM
i know this feeling...
i guess everyone does.
but like everything else,
it will pass.
life and pain is just writing material!
and if we can get something out of it,
then it was worth it.

--
a. :blackrose:

"writing is fighting."
-frank chin
:iconkamijisatsu:
~kamijisatsu Sep 22, 2006, 6:12:53 AM
You're right. It sucks when someone dies when it was within their power to live. You never get over it. It never hurts less. You just write about it and hope that somewhere they can see it and know that you still love them. No matter what.
:icon-ninny:
~-ninny Sep 22, 2006, 6:14:06 AM
i miss you too!!!!hugs~~~
:icondarknessembraced:
~darknessembraced Oct 18, 2006, 7:19:51 PM
aww.
sniff.

A terrible feeling
we all can relate in some way
:hug:

--
Art is either plagiarism or revolution.
-Paul Gauguin

~.~ :blackrose: :heart: :blackrose: ~.~
:iconnecropsy:
~necropsy Nov 14, 2006, 2:17:16 PM
I liked the feel of this....


No, im not back.... just checking out some stuff!
:iconmyangelofmusic:
`Myangelofmusic Dec 25, 2006, 1:33:52 PM
im in love with your poetry..

im so glad im back..

its brilliant, Kel :]

--
♪ ♫
I've run out of complicated theories..
:iconverbalize:
~verbalize Jan 6, 2007, 7:19:45 PM
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i like this even though its sad its just that its true and real and i can feel it.

--
subliminal confetti

:bulletred: :pointr: :shithappens: :pointl:



:bulletblue: :!: Brandy Lynne :!:
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