lovely little dolly
try me out
i wait for you
in my pretty package
made of blue
look at me
i can sing you a song
even twirl about
all for you
in my pretty package
made of blue
you bring me home
play a while
smile and laugh
even twirl about
i sing a song
all for you
in my pretty package
made of blue
i'm not so shiny
my dress is torn
my smile grew faded
jaded and worn
but i can be better!
new for you!
in my pretty package
made of blue
you look at me
half a sigh
you tried me out
you're all done now
threw me away
i sit here alone
in my pretty package
made of blue














Comments
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Exposure is to the author what the camera is to an actor, without it a whole lot of work is just a glorified journal.
You can tell the callibur of a writer by their ability to evoke emotion where normally there is none. Where there was nothing images and feelings and memories come to light. That is what you have done. And that is why you are so talented.
It brings back all of those memories of when I was younger and I couldn't wait to get my hands on some new toy or another. It was usually Ninja Turtles related. Or Transformers. Man, I loved those toys. Now, here I am years later, and the only thing that's changed are the toys.
Good work. Very good.
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We all get paid, but some get faith before they die.
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I know where my towel is.
I missed your comments.
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